“Just make sure you tell my family it’s okay, I’m sorry. But it’s too late, I’m sorry. So much weighing on me. I don’t wanna live to see another day, I’m sorry. But I can’t stay, I’m sorry. So much weighing on me.”
-Joyner Lucas, I’m sorry
I don’t miss you
To miss you,
I’d need to care
You would’ve needed to
be there
But you weren’t
All you did in life
was quit
A wife and kids,
you abandoned
A whole life you just
left
Why?
The only thing you could
commit to was,
suicide
So many things,
I just don’t know
So many more since you
left no note
Can you hear me?
You can, I hope
So many words
I never spoke
Now I can’t
cause you left
On those words,
I choke
Were we alike?
Did we share
the same mind?
I’ve felt so alone
through my whole life
Again I ask,
why?
Terrified I might
Grow to be like
you.
If so,
I’d probably choose
to end up
six feet deep too.
“Oh, dear Dad. Can you see my now? I am myself–like you somehow. I’ll wait up in the dark, for you to speak to me. I’ll hold the pain. Release me.”
-Pearl Jam, Release Me
Even if you don’t enjoy hip-hop, I still encourage you to watch this video and listen to the lyrics. Very poetic and powerful writing by Joyner Lucas.
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-Jordan Antonacci
Wow. I can feel the hate in this poem, dear. This is a strong piece and I can almost able to peek into your heart. Very emotional and forward. Loved it.
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I like alot of his music…I think he does not get the light he deserves
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Powerful. Exactly what I always know will come from you.
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I try my best!
Thank you 🙂
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Very emotional piece
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i liked this one. it’s intense.
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Just what I was going for! Thank you. Really glad you liked it 🙂
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This post is very intense and has alot of emotion attached to it…i felt every single word…
it’s very good….
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Thanks babe!!! ❤️
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Wow…
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Damn, this is intense. Not sure what to say.
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And that is okay. Nothing needs to be said. 🙂 thanks for liking and commenting!
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Wow…
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